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Friday, April 11, 2008
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JUST ME: Final Chapter
JUST ME
Paul Diaz
Chapter 11: Last Dance
One sunny day in March Kathleen went to visit Jonathan, but he was not at home. He was not at Charlie’s either but she knew there was only one last place to look. Kathleen visited Jonathan’s special place and found him there seated on the bench. She approached him but he didn’t even turn around to greet her.
“Jonathan can we talk” she said. Jonathan didn’t move an inch but answered “Okay”.
“I know you are mad at me so let me do the talking for now but please listen to me” she pleaded. Jonathan stood up and walked forward, “I’m not mad anymore, so there is no need for you to explain.”
Kathleen lost the momentum and was nervous; she knew he was still mad at her. “My birthday is coming up soon, I am turning 18, I will be having my debut party” she stated.
“Happy Birthday in advance” was all Jonathan said. Kathleen was struggling for words, there seemed to be a barrier already between them. “I would be happy if you could come to my party” she softly said.
“I am sorry Kathleen, but I wont be coming to your party” Jonathan said.
Kathleen started to cry and said “Jonathan please forgive me, I didn’t mean to hurt you I swear.”
“I think you know the way back so please leave. I want to be alone now” Jonathan said coldheartedly.
“Look me in the eyes and tell me you don’t like me anymore then I will leave!” Kathleen shouted.
Jonathan faced her and his eyes were covered with tears. “I don’t like you”.
Kathleen was so hurt that she turned around and ran away.
The day of the party arrived and Anne was with Kathleen in dressing room preparing.
“Hey Kath, you seem happy today” Anne commented. “I fell something great will happen, I just know it” Kathleen replied.
The ceremonies started and it was time for the dance. Eighteen men were lined up each holding a rose waiting their turn to dance with Kathleen. Tom was the last on the line holding a different rose, a white one.
As Kathleen danced with the each men she kept glancing over at the main entrance of the hall. There were only two men left, the seventeenth and eighteenth rose. Kathleen started to dance with the seventeenth guy but still stared at the door. She closed her eyes and prayed.
Anne went towards the door since she heard someone knocking. As she opened the door she was shocked to see Jonathan. Kathleen looked at the door but she could not see who Anne was speaking with.
“Jonathan, why are you here?” Anne asked.
“Where is Kathleen?” he simply replied.
“She is dancing, its almost over, Tom will be her last dance you should have come sooner” Anne said.
“Tom? I will be her last dance” Jonathan stated and he entered the hall and walked towards Tom. Anne followed him and handed another white rose then said “I don’t know what you’re trying to do but good luck” she whispered.
Kathleen saw Jonathan and was surprised; he had cut his hair and looked stunning. The music ended and Kathleen walked towards the two men with white roses on their hands.
“Hey fat boy, history is going to repeat itself today. So start running” Tom whispers to Jonathan but he didn’t reply.
Kathleen stood in front of the two men, and looked at them both. Everyone was excited to see who she would pick and the room became silent. He looked at Tom and smiled then moved one step closer towards him. Jonathan bowed his head and Tom smiled. Kathleen looked at Tom and said “I’m sorry” then she held Jonathan’s hand and pulled him. Jonathan was surprised and looked at Kathleen, they walked towards the center and the center and everyone was looking on.
The two of them were standing face to face in the middle of the hall, staring at each other’s eyes.
“You cut your hair, why?” she asked him.
“A pretty lady told me before that I look better with short hair” he answered.
“You still came even though you said you don’t like me anymore” Kathleen whispered.
“Why did you choose me?” Jonathan countered.
“I thought you don’t like me anymore” Kathleen repeated.
“Tom is there you can still change your mind” he said.
“You don’t like me anymore” she still whispered.
“Yes I said I don’t like you anymore” Jonathan revealed.
“Why did you come then?” Kathleen asked.
“Because I realized I was lying to myself when I said that. Kathleen I came because I love you” he finally said his true feelings.
Tears were starting to fill up Kathleen’s eyes. “I chose you because I love you too.”
She pulled his hands and placed them on her hips then placed her hands on his shoulders. The music began to play and everyone was teary eyed, some were clapping seeing them finally dance.
“I’ve been waiting for a long time to do this” she whispered. “This dance?” he asked her. “No this” she said and she moved her face closer towards his, their lips gently touched each other and finally met for the first time.
“JUST ME” she whispered and Jonathan looked her in the eye. “You read it didn’t you?” he asked her. She smiled and put her arms around his head. “I made my own version, listen closely” she said.
JUST ME
I wished from the start that you would ask me to dance
But I messed it up with my confusing glance
Those words you spoke did touch my heart, a smile in my face you did see
That smile was true and just for you and not for your departing plea.
I felt so bad when you ran away, how I wished that you did stay
So I saved my first kiss just for you, hoping we meet again someday
And so we did meet after a very long and I was surprised to see
After all the pain I did cause you, you still do like me
I promise you all my love for you and you alone
If ever I lose you again, id wish for a heart of stone
With this said I hope that you too could promise me
That in you heart it will only be JUST ME.
“I promise, Just you and me”
-The End-
JUST ME: Chapter 10
JUST ME
Paul Diaz
Chapter 10: Why I Like Him
Kathleen went to school Monday and her eyes were sore from crying. Jonathan was just seating in his usual seat and his eyes were covered with his long curly hair. She just sat beside him and bowed her head. Anne approached the two of them and tried to cheer them up. “Hey Kath, did you finish the assignment?” she asked. Kathleen looks at Anne and remembers they did have an assignment and she forgot all about it. “I forgot to do it” Kathleen whispers. The closed and the professor walked towards the front. Anne rushed back towards her seat seeing the professor in front. “Anne since you are still standing why don’t you collect the assignments for me as I check the attendance, thank you” the professor said.
Anne collected the assignments of everyone, she approached Jonathan to get his assignment, Jonathan looked at Anne and handed over two sheets of paper. Anne looked at the two sheets and saw that he made two assignments, one with his name and the other with Kathleen’s name. As Anne was about to tell Kathleen about it Jonathan quickly held her hand and looked her in the eye. Anne understood at once so she separated the two sheets since they had similar handwriting so the professor wont notice it. Anne submitted the assignments in the professor’s table and went back to her seat and glanced at Jonathan who was mouthing some words. Anne understood and smiled at him as she faced front.
Lunchtime came and Jonathan quickly rushed out of the classroom, Kathleen just sat there lifeless. Anne approached her and said “Kath lets eat lunch together, I need to talk to you” and Kathleen looked at her and nodded.
In the cafeteria Kathleen was just playing with her food, “Kathleen do you really like Jonathan?” she asks. Kathleen looks at Anne and nods her head. “Help me understand why you like him, tell me your story” Anne tells her. Kathleen sat back and bowed her head and bit her lip. “Is it because he looks handsome now?” Anne inquires and Kathleen looks at her and said “NO! I liked him since he was fat!”
“So tell me why then” Anne adds. Kathleen starts playing again with her food and started to talk.
“It was freshmen year we were classmates and I noticed him. He was always being picked at or called names but he did not care. I felt sorry for him and but you know he really impressed me because even though he was not treated well he fought back using his brain. I was jealous really with him getting those medals and awards; I thought myself maybe if I studied hard too I would be able to achieve the same just like him. “
“That was the time I started to study, so when sophomore year came I was beside him on the stage, he was first place and I was second. Junior year came and I was more popular than him even though I was only second, he was first but you know how it is, they never saw him for what he truly was, they only know him because of….”
“Junior year was tough on me, I started to hang out with friends, I slumped in studying, I forgot to do my assignments but there was one time I did really forget and I approached the teacher, I admitted to her that I forgot to do my assignment and she just laughed at me. She showed me her records and I saw that I had complete assignments. I checked with all teachers and they all showed me I did have complete assignments. One teacher even showed me a copy, I did not recognize it at all, it was not my handwriting. I didn’t admit it since I did not want to fail; I just laughed it out with her and said I might have gotten amnesia. I did recognize the handwriting and it was Jonathan’s. “
“So one day I pretended I did not have an assignment and observed him. I saw it clearly he passed two papers. He cared for me that much, I wanted to tell him I did make my assignment but I was too shy at that time already. From that time on I never forget making assignments; I made sure he saw that I made them. But still I noticed he always has one extra assignment made kept in his folder.”
“If he treated me as his competitor he would not have been doing that, but he never saw me as a competitor. I wanted to get to know him better but he never looked me in the eye or spoke to me. “
“There was another time when I was being scolded by the teacher and I was about to cry already, he stood up and shouted ‘I am hungry’ and headed towards the door. Everyone started laughing but the teacher scolded him badly. The teacher forgot about me, all of his anger was focused on Jonathan. “
“He has a kind heart, he helps others study, and he helps them to understand certain lessons even though they are the same people who make fun of him. And one time Jerry Cross squeezed my butt, I was so mad. That same day I heard Jerry had been beaten up by someone. Jerry was ashamed to say who it was but I saw Jonathans fists bruised the next day. I wanted to thank him so badly but I just was too shy to do so.”
Kathleen wiped her tears once again and bowed her head. “So he never changed it seems” Anne said. Kathleen looked at Anne, “What do you mean?” she asked her. “This morning, he submitted two assignments, one had your name, I was going to tell you about it but the look on his faced begging me not to” Anne revealed and Katherine started to sob.
“He still cares for you even though you treat him that way. He may have changed his appearance but still he is the same person as before. Even though you dealt him the final blow during the graduation ball he still likes you, even though you left him to be with Tom he still likes you.” Anne implied.
“Please don’t say that. I told you during that ball I did not mean to reject him. I smiled because I was touched with what he said. It was the first time he even spoke to me so I was really happy. I smiled because I was happy and not because he requested me to do so. I wanted to dance with him but he ran away. I tried to catch him but he was gone” Kathleen stated as more tears fall.
“And what about Tom?” Anne added. “Tom is just a friend. Nothing more. I just wanted to take time off from Jonathan since each day I was with him I was falling deeply in love with him. I just wanted to take things slow because I made a promise with my father that I won’t have a boyfriend until I am 18. I will be 18 soon but the more I spend time with Jonathan… I would have to break the promise I made with my dad before he died. So I just wanted to take time off. But I didn’t know things would happen this way.”
“He is drifting away from you, sooner or later he will be gone. If you do love him make things right.” Anne told Kathleen and left her alone.
